Thank you so much for the feedback! I really should find the project file and work on it again.

How would you have gone about ending it?

I think it’s a tie between the two albums Tranquillity Base Hotel and Casino by Arctic Monkeys and 22, a million by Bon Iver.

The former ventures into atmospheric landscapes, showcasing Alex Turner’s storytelling, while the latter combines folk, indie rock, and experimentation. Both albums push boundaries, captivate with their courage, and represent artistic growth, delivering transcendent musical experiences.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aiYelYvxRMs&t=680s&pp=ygUhdHJhbnF1aWxpdHkgYmFzZSBob3RlbCBhbmQgY2FzaW5v

https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLyWB0TxTMmTkmcllJIkFbKaAhSQhKWNhV

Thank you so much for the listen and feedback! it is greatly appreciated!

Here is the original if you ever wanted to check it out https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SeIJmciN8mo

What would you recommend to improve the breakdown section at 0:50? Is there too much going on? Not enough cow bell? lol

Oh hell yeah! I have no idea how one would get into that line of work, but im sure there are some indie game programmers looking for some nice tracks out there :)

Thank you so much for the listen and feedback!

Other artists could have done the talking breakdown thing, but Lorde is so amazingly dramatic that she seems to do it in every song xD

This is sweet! Thank you for sharing!

It has a video game vibe to it that I love.

I agree with @inihaw about the snare. It could be a bit more synthesized to fit the feel of a “Forest Night Theme”

That being said; if I were playing a game and this was the on during a level or menu, I wouldn’t be mad about it :)